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To My Brothers Girlfriend. - April 17th 2012, 12:58 PM

I know something for sure,
Your nothing but a whore,
Your broke my brother into two,
Why did he even mess with the likes of you?

You messed with both of our minds,
Everyone thought you were so kind,
You made us loose our sanity,
You took him away from me,

Everyone got wrapped up in your lies,
No one saw the look in your eyes,
Your were the devil, oh so sinister,
Nobody thought you were monster,

My brothers going to fix himself,
So you can go fuck yourself,
He now knows what you do,
He won’t mess with the likes of you,

So you can leave you fucking whore,
Because now I am sure,
The apologies won’t matter,
My brother knows he can do better!
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Re: To My Brothers Girlfriend. - April 17th 2012, 04:33 PM

This is really interesting; I liked it.
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Re: To My Brothers Girlfriend. - April 17th 2012, 04:48 PM

I love the rhyming and the use of "whore". It gives a strong edge to the poem.



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Re: To My Brothers Girlfriend. - April 18th 2012, 12:08 AM

I really love this poem, I can totally feel the emotion.


Do you ever get a little bit tired of life
Like you're not really happy but you don't wanna die
Like you're hanging by a thread but you gotta survive
'Cause you gotta survive
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