[dancer]

Wow.

I don't mean to sound cliche or anything, but that's a really powerful poem. The address and phrasing still feels "real," even with the rhyming couplets (I tend to worry that my poems sound too sing-songy when I do that, but yours definitely doesn't). Definitely gets across the emotion. The repetition and play with wording structure/resonance, especially in the last stanza, is really good.

And hey, how are you doing?