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Forum: Self Expression October 11th 2012, 10:03 PM
Replies: 9
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Posted By Validity
Re: Looking for honest feedback on this poem

I know right?! Haha.
I live in Tweed now, but have lived on the Gold Coast for most of my life, only moved back to new south wales three years ago :bleh:

Jay.
Forum: Self Expression October 11th 2012, 09:38 AM
Replies: 9
Views: 1,174
Posted By Validity
Re: Looking for honest feedback on this poem

Yeah, I know how that feels :P I read over my first attempts at novels the other day and my jaw hit the ground, I was like 'no way, did I NOT know how to use full stops? And my dialogue? NO!!' haha,...
Forum: Self Expression October 11th 2012, 08:09 AM
Replies: 9
Views: 1,174
Posted By Validity
Re: Looking for honest feedback on this poem

Hey there, mate!
This is excellant! The writing structure is brilliant, and I can sense emotion in this :) you have talent!

Jay.
P.S I live up the coast from Sydney :bleh: good to see people...
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