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Re: Poem - October 28th 2015, 10:46 PM

The title should be, "great poem". How about, "please listen" as the title? I feel like it'd fit since it's about listening to warning signs that your friends may show or if they come to you in need. I really like this poem. The lines are creative and I like the message of the poem. Good job on this!