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Re: about being a girl - a poem - May 2nd 2016, 07:37 PM
The last two stanzas and the part "and tell us 'our body is a secret even we shouldn’t know.'" are my absolute favorites from this piece!!!! I love this piece so so so much, thank you for sharing. It's very deep and ohhh to me it's perfect, it gets to the point in a much better and more meaningful way than just saying, "There's a problem with your definition of beauty." This speaks volumes. I think you did a great job.

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