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Feline the love.
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Age: 25
Gender: Female
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Location: salem
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Join Date: August 25th 2012
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Re: that dress -
November 17th 2016, 12:51 PM
Quote:
You think who to call out to
So you make a mess,
To find that torn up dress
The one that lives,
way back in your closet
Throw it over the white cotton pillow
Release what needs to let go,
Sparkles and sequins fall to the floor
You don't notice the blood anymore
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I really like this part, but I like the whole thing; I always like what you write. I also think it's cool how you used the word "distress" in there too because "dress" and distress" sound similar.
If clarity's in death, then why won't this die?
Years of tearing down our banners, you and I
Living for the thrill of hitting you where it hurts
Give me back my girlhood, it was mine first
The axe forgets, but the tree remembers
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