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Re: Eating disorder article -
September 18th 2018, 07:35 PM
I think doing it one section at a time is an awesome idea. 
I like your title a lot. I was thinking I can do some edits at this time but suggest more once your sections are together.
I was thinking you could add the environment someone is in as a risk factor/link. You could also say that you're going to be discussing the risk factors that "can be found in people with..." instead of using the word "applicable." I too, would definitely put what OSFED means and maybe say that it was formerly known (I think?) as EDNOS?
If clarity's in death, then why won't this die?
Years of tearing down our banners, you and I
Living for the thrill of hitting you where it hurts
Give me back my girlhood, it was mine first
The axe forgets, but the tree remembers
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