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Re: Abyss -
December 5th 2021, 10:18 PM
I really thought this was a wonderful piece. You conveyed heavy emotions with such few words.
Stay strong.  <3
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Originally Posted by Astro04
Hm, good one!
But too short phrases for me. I felt something like I'm caged.
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There is nothing wrong with the way people write. Please don't ever criticize someone's writing style.
Sometimes shorter is better. These words are heavy and a whole lot doesn't need to be said.
Please, reconsider before you put words like this out there, because not only they hurt the original author; but they hurt those who might be lurking/browsing anonymously. Or other users on here who might be debating sharing their creative words on here but are afraid of receiving comments just like yours.
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