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Re: This is me (try at a poem) -
September 10th 2012, 10:56 PM
Thanks everyone. I fixed up the ending though:
Let me in,
can you hear me over the din?
It's getting cold out here,
so let me in, be a dear.
Yeah, it actually illuminates how I actually feel at the moment, I want help, I want to be able to "get out of the cold" but I feel as if nobody will actually let me in. My depression haunts me, never leaving me, always stalking me and waiting to strike when I start to feel bad again.
Thanks all, I always thought poem writing would be just beyond my grasp, seems like I reached for it :P
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