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Viper1996

June 18th 2013 06:17 PM

Poor Little Angel. (triggering suicide, self harm, abuse)

Poor little angel,
with her hair all tangled,
she fought so hard,
but it was all too much,
her innocence shattered,
shes bruised and battered,
her little heads swirling,
the razor twirling,
its time to say goodbye,
she wont wake up, after tonight.

Viper1996

June 18th 2013 06:31 PM

Re: Poor Little Angel. (triggering suicide, self harm, abuse)

This isn't my best work and I would really appreciate if I could get some help on this. Thanks.

Not_here

June 18th 2013 07:42 PM

Re: Poor Little Angel. (triggering suicide, self harm, abuse)

it's really good! So emotional

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June 18th 2013 10:40 PM

Re: Poor Little Angel. (triggering suicide, self harm, abuse)

I personally like it. :) Maybe just let any other ideas flow and then edit after?

Evanescent

June 22nd 2013 05:03 AM

Re: Poor Little Angel. (triggering suicide, self harm, abuse)

I think it's excellent, I don't think it's needs changed at all.

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