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BluEiis April 21st 2011 04:00 PM

Rape
 
Because of you, he'll never understand why I'm afraid to hold his hand.
Because of you, I check my closet every night.
Because of you, I live in fear, fear of the moments when we come face to face once more.
You'll never know the pain, the emotional turmoil and stains.
You'll never bear the scars I do.
The scars that I have because of you.
You don't know what it's like to see you in my nightmares, wake up, go out, and see you everywhere
You took my innocence and shattered my heart.
I should've run from you right from the start
I've been scared of you for far too long.
This is my moment.
Right here. Right now.
I'm going to be strong.
Today is the last day you walk free.
Today is the day.
The day I face your rape.





Lost the trial today. Can't win em all though.. =/

luvflamingos April 21st 2011 04:04 PM

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The subject is so sad, but writing great. It is so powerful and full of emotion. I am sorry this happened to you too. Stay strong.

Just Peachy. April 21st 2011 04:04 PM

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Your poems are full of some strong emotion, that I am sure A LOT of people can relate to.
That's why it's good that you post them, people won't feel alone.
I do enjoy your poems a lot though. <3

Everglow. April 21st 2011 04:09 PM

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This is so full of emotion, and I'm sorry you went through all of this.
Take care. Keep writing, you're good.

BluEiis April 22nd 2011 02:30 PM

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Thanks guys(= I really appreciate the feedback. <3

Raggedy Man, Goodnight! April 22nd 2011 02:34 PM

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I am really sorry you had to go through this, the poemis beautifully written and full of emotion, well done. Keep writing x

lostandalone April 22nd 2011 02:39 PM

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I am sorry you had to experience this. Even tho the trial didn't convict him, good for you for standing up to him and reporting him. Your poem is sad but so captures the afterffects and emotions. Great writing


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