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Avox.

May 26th 2015 12:13 PM

Lonely People

A place of loss
And love lost from
Lonely people.
They try to find it
But it escapes their grasps
Like the wind.
They follow it,
Searching for it,
Reaching towards it.
But love doesn't know them.
They are forced to live alone
Every day of their lonely lives.

Not_here

May 26th 2015 01:52 PM

Re: Lonely People

This is my favorite line because you made an awesome personification.

Quote:

But love doesn't know them.

And I like the imagery/metaphor of chasing the wind.

Ennui.

May 26th 2015 08:29 PM

Re: Lonely People

I agree with the favorite line! D:

hocus pocus

May 27th 2015 07:12 AM

Re: Lonely People

I love the alliteration. :hehe:

Chai.

May 27th 2015 11:57 AM

Re: Lonely People

I agree with the favorite line, too!

Kintsukuroi.

May 28th 2015 05:59 AM

Re: Lonely People

I love the alliteration you used. ^.^

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