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But I'm just a ghost.
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Name: Dez
Age: 30
Gender: Agender
Pronouns: They/Them
Location: Connecticut, USA
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Join Date: November 16th 2010
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Re: Please give me constructive criticism on this poem! -
March 1st 2013, 11:27 AM
I like it a lot! The first sentence drew me in and made me want to continue reading. There is a lot of emotion and power in this, and you used a lot of great wording. Good job! 
Oh, you are not useless
We are just
Misguided ghosts
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