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Gotta keep your face up.
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Name: Dez
Age: 29
Gender: Agender
Pronouns: They/Them
Location: Connecticut, USA
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Re: my broken china doll poem -
April 11th 2013, 11:36 AM
I love this so much! I like how you started every line with "Broken China doll." This is well written in general. 
The sun is always gonna rise up
You need to get up, gotta keep your head up
Look at the people all around you
The way you feel is something everybody goes through
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