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Spite and coffee.
 Jeez, get a life!
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Re: another day -
October 19th 2016, 12:56 AM
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Originally Posted by In-the-way
What's another day more?
Wishing the people I care for,
Cares for me back
As if they're a shooting star,
And I can just ask
No, it doesn't work like that
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That was my favourite part, but I really liked the whole piece. I especially like the way you wrote a couple of example scenarios about everyday activities and then went deeper into the feelings. 
"Love means never having to say you're a werewolf."
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