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Gotta keep your face up.
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Name: Dez
Age: 29
Gender: Agender
Pronouns: They/Them
Location: Connecticut, USA
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Join Date: November 16th 2010
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Re: Untitled Poem :O -
September 12th 2012, 10:28 AM
This is really great, don't put it down.  It is powerful and it did its job if it helped get your emotions out. I like the last line, how you put "Except being accepted." I don't know why but I like the way they sound together.
The sun is always gonna rise up
You need to get up, gotta keep your head up
Look at the people all around you
The way you feel is something everybody goes through
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