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LaCorrsa

August 30th 2012 06:10 AM

Poem 5

Why does being alone have to hurt so much?
Vieing for love and yearning for touch.

Cant I get just a small taste?
Smell of skin and fingers interlaced.

When can my heart burst forth true?
I wish to embrace, all that is you.

Wherever you are, come home soon.
I am alone, watching the moon.

The blanket spread, coffee brewed.
Hear my voice, tame my mood.

Lets dance in the dark, under the moon.
Please my love, come home soon.

¯|_(ツ)_|¯

August 30th 2012 10:42 AM

Re: Poem 5

I really love this and just the word choice and mood you put into this. You did a great job of rhyming as well. I liked the second stanza the best. Keep it up! :)

LaCorrsa

August 30th 2012 08:49 PM

Re: Poem 5

haha thankyou so much! I wrote this very early in the morning when my emotions got away from me ^.^

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