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LaCorrsa

August 30th 2012 07:10 AM

Poem 5

Why does being alone have to hurt so much?
Vieing for love and yearning for touch.

Cant I get just a small taste?
Smell of skin and fingers interlaced.

When can my heart burst forth true?
I wish to embrace, all that is you.

Wherever you are, come home soon.
I am alone, watching the moon.

The blanket spread, coffee brewed.
Hear my voice, tame my mood.

Lets dance in the dark, under the moon.
Please my love, come home soon.

Face Up.

August 30th 2012 11:42 AM

Re: Poem 5

I really love this and just the word choice and mood you put into this. You did a great job of rhyming as well. I liked the second stanza the best. Keep it up! :)

LaCorrsa

August 30th 2012 09:49 PM

Re: Poem 5

haha thankyou so much! I wrote this very early in the morning when my emotions got away from me ^.^

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