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Not_here June 30th 2013 01:54 PM

poem I wrote on june 23 (I could never think of normal titles)
 
Bring a little more peace
to this world
bring a little less suffering
I've always searched how
and now, I've found
the answer.
I'm the problem, I was all along
eliminate me and the problem is gone
I've restored the way it used to be
before I was born.
no one needs to know I once existed
life will go on, with all it's twist and turns
they'll be too concerned
to remember this broken girl
but that's how I want it
I'll be replaced
there's nothing in me that the world
doesn't already have
or can't create
I don't want to b the one
who is too weak to go on
I have my ways of
making it seem like a mistake
then no one will feel sad
or regret
"it was an accident"
they'll say
there's shades of gray
we don't know how it happened
She was swimming passed lifeguard hours
and after dark
we called her
but no answer

Ennui. June 30th 2013 07:00 PM

Re: poem I wrote on june 23 (I could never think of normal titles)
 
Haha I am the same way with titles. Half the time I end up taking a word or two from the poem. XD

This is really well written, too. Stay strong!

Not_here July 2nd 2013 06:42 PM

Re: poem I wrote on june 23 (I could never think of normal titles)
 
XD thank you Dez and I think I should start doing that too. It might be better than what I come up with :3


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