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Azure. August 15th 2013 05:44 PM

A poem that has no title:)
 
Well, I've never written a poem outside of school, so I thought I'd give poetry a shot. This poem is about a friend who wanted to help, but they ended up hurting me more instead and how I blame myself for it. So, here it goes.


You told me to trust you, tell you my secrets
Told me it was okay
You said you would help me, I'd be better
But look where I am today.

It was you that made everything worse
I fell and you never came back.
My hope for life and trust is gone
You showed me the truth that you lack

Maybe I hurt you, this is my fault
Maybe this is the end
And maybe I shouldn't trust you
Or anyone ever again

You left me alone, you never said a word
My pieces dropped to the dust
What did I mean to you, really?
None of your words I trust

You think everything is fine between us
You don't know what a bitch you've been
You never confess
What you've done wrong or that you've cut my skin.

I know that I hurt you, this is my fault
I know this is the end
And I know I shouldn't trust you
Or anyone ever again

mindflower August 15th 2013 06:14 PM

Re: A poem that has no title:)
 
I really like this, though I'm sorry it happened like this :( ...anyways, very relatable to me anyways, and you should keep writing :)

Stay strong :hug:

¯|_(ツ)_|¯ August 16th 2013 01:46 AM

Re: A poem that has no title:)
 
This has a lot of emotion in this, and I agree with Tay, I'm sorry about how things turned out!


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