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Moon October 15th 2013 10:49 AM

A Poem attempt after 5+ years of silence
 
Screaming And Shouting
But nobody hears me
These words in my head
Just cant seem to escape

I beg and I plead
But my voice is silent
Like a shroud of darkness
No one can see me

This pain is overwhelming
These wounds will never heal
Bloody and bruised
Exhausted and week

I've been here too long
I've fought too hard
My body is broken
And my time is up

(I know, it's horrible, but I haven't written in like, 5 to 7 years, I don't even remember.)

Storyteller. October 15th 2013 10:55 AM

Re: A Poem attempt after 5+ years of silence
 
Don't be so hard on yourself. I really enjoyed this. :hug:

hocus pocus October 15th 2013 01:24 PM

Re: A Poem attempt after 5+ years of silence
 
I like it! :hug: You should keep writing, it's a great outlet :)

Trickmatic October 15th 2013 01:46 PM

Re: A Poem attempt after 5+ years of silence
 
Hey Caitlyn

It's a great poem. It's good that you are getting back in the writing groove. Hope to see you write more!

blackheartedballerina October 15th 2013 02:45 PM

Re: A Poem attempt after 5+ years of silence
 
i like it :)

¯|_(ツ)_|¯ October 15th 2013 04:07 PM

Re: A Poem attempt after 5+ years of silence
 
Caitymaid! I like this. :D I think you should write more often. Shake off those cobwebs and I bet you'll be good to go!

Azure. October 15th 2013 07:58 PM

Re: A Poem attempt after 5+ years of silence
 
I like it! Keep writing- you'll get back into it soon:)

DeletedAccount69 October 17th 2013 04:29 AM

Re: A Poem attempt after 5+ years of silence
 
This wasn't horrible. I really enjoyed this. Thank you for sharing.


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