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FrostCoatedHeart October 18th 2013 10:34 PM

My mom is a Vixen (poem)
 
( Short poem, I can't write very well. This is based on my relationship with my mom.)

I used to look up to you, Mom.
Your beauty and wavy dark hair,
You were such a pretty woman,
but you never played fair.

Jealously got the best of you,
I am your daughter, not your competition.
So say goodbye to what we shared,
Leave me with this heart condition.

Ennui. October 19th 2013 12:59 AM

Re: My mom is a Vixen (poem)
 
I'm really sorry you had to go through this but it is great you were able to get it out through expressing yourself!

DeletedAccount69 October 19th 2013 02:40 AM

Re: My mom is a Vixen (poem)
 
I am sorry you are having to deal with all of this. I know it can be tough to have struggles with your mom but I think it is good that you are expressing it through your writing. I hope that this helped in some way.

FrostCoatedHeart October 19th 2013 02:44 PM

Re: My mom is a Vixen (poem)
 
Aww, thanks so much. It helps a bit, :).

Azure. October 19th 2013 06:04 PM

Re: My mom is a Vixen (poem)
 
I hope things get better for you! I'm glad writing helped a bit too:)

coolkid98 October 21st 2013 08:41 PM

Re: My mom is a Vixen (poem)
 
sorry to hear you went through this, hope things get better for you :hug: Really well written poem though

FrostCoatedHeart October 24th 2013 03:26 AM

Re: My mom is a Vixen (poem)
 
*Blushes* Aw, thank you very much I tried. :hug:


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