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WhisperingSilence

November 17th 2013 11:06 AM

Haunted

Those words you said,
They play on repeat,
On a constant loop inside my head,
All those times your fists black and blue by them I got beat,
Those things you said,
Those things you did,
For you it's over,
For me I'm haunted,
Those things you said,
Those things you did,
All the times your fists black and blue by them I got beat,
I'm haunted by you,
Those things you did,
Those things you said,
They haunt me too,
I'm haunted by memories of you.

Mahray

November 17th 2013 11:08 AM

Re: Haunted

Wow :'(

I like the repetition, works well.

¯|_(ツ)_|¯

November 17th 2013 05:17 PM

Re: Haunted

I agree with Mahray here!

Azure.

November 17th 2013 08:54 PM

Re: Haunted

I love the repetition. Thanks for sharing:)

Koharuchan

November 18th 2013 02:51 AM

Re: Haunted

I enjoyed the repetition as well. Nice work! :)

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