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Tigereyes January 31st 2014 08:04 PM
Oh look. I wrote a new poem.
 
Why do I feel so much remorse
For something I should not feel sorry for?
How can I be the one to blame
When you were always the one causing my pain?
Why should I regret doing what's right
When no one else was brave enough to fight?
Why should I regret speaking out
When I know what I saw? -without a doubt.

hocus pocus January 31st 2014 08:17 PM
Re: Oh look. I wrote a new poem.
 
I love it! I like it how you ask questions, it makes the reader think. :)

Tigereyes January 31st 2014 08:22 PM
Re: Oh look. I wrote a new poem.
 
Thank you!

Azure. January 31st 2014 10:56 PM
Re: Oh look. I wrote a new poem.
 
I really liked this and I love how you wrote it!

franz1 February 1st 2014 09:48 AM
Re: Oh look. I wrote a new poem.
 
You did a great job! I wish I could write as good as this....I tend to throw my emotions out and let it form itself...Sometimes it makes since, other, well think of a room of 100 kids with paint and the wall is the canvas. It's a mess. But anyways......I loved it!!!!!!

Tigereyes February 1st 2014 01:17 PM
Re: Oh look. I wrote a new poem.
 
Thank you. I really appreciate it :)

The.adorable.1 February 1st 2014 01:39 PM
Re: Oh look. I wrote a new poem.
 
beautiful :)

Ennui. February 1st 2014 07:24 PM
Re: Oh look. I wrote a new poem.
 
Short but really good!

Tigereyes February 1st 2014 07:29 PM
Re: Oh look. I wrote a new poem.
 
Thanks to both of you :)

DeletedAccount69 February 1st 2014 08:19 PM
Re: Oh look. I wrote a new poem.
 
I really liked this. I could relate to it to a certain extent.

Tigereyes February 2nd 2014 11:35 AM
Re: Oh look. I wrote a new poem.
 
I'm glad you liked it.

DeletedAccount12 February 4th 2014 01:40 AM
Re: Oh look. I wrote a new poem.
 
This is pretty good. :)

Tigereyes February 4th 2014 02:14 AM
Re: Oh look. I wrote a new poem.
 
Thank you.


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