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WhisperingSilence

March 10th 2014 10:17 PM

Sinking

The waves crash , big, scary and tall,
They are trying to knock her down,
She's not let them past or into her walls,
The mask won't slip,
She will smile, in her feelings she will drown,
She's sinking,
The waves crash,
They knock her down,
Dragging her away..
Onlookers can only watch her drown,
Her feelings the waves,
Her life dragging her down,
Emotions consuming making her drown.

Eljoria

March 10th 2014 10:21 PM

Re: Sinking

Awww...

What emotions..

They are strange combination of feelings, who knows what exactly they are..

Be strong :)

¯|_(ツ)_|¯

March 11th 2014 02:44 AM

Re: Sinking

I agree, so emotional! D:

hocus pocus

March 11th 2014 03:58 AM

Re: Sinking

Wow, I really like this! The line where you said "Onlookers can only watch her drown" is a good description of how it feels.

Azure.

March 11th 2014 11:18 PM

Re: Sinking

There was so much emotion put into this. :) It was really relatable too! Thanks for sharing. :)

DeletedAccount12

March 12th 2014 09:46 PM

Re: Sinking

I really liked how you described everything. I like it!

DeletedAccount69

March 14th 2014 01:52 AM

Re: Sinking

I liked this and could relate to this quite a bit. Thank you for sharing.

Raggedy Man, Goodnight!

March 14th 2014 02:08 AM

Re: Sinking

This is really good.
Well done :-)

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