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WhisperingSilence

September 6th 2014 09:21 PM

Failure.

My voice nothing but a whisper,
A drop in the ocean,
Slowing drowning..
Sinking.
Failing.
Falling to the ground,
With nothing but a whisper..
That no one can hear....
Failure,
Not me,
Not you,
The public who walk past us..
Without noticing our silent screams.
Failure.

Azure.

September 6th 2014 09:24 PM

Re: Failure.

I love how this was written. Very powerful and beautiful. :)

DeletedAccount69

September 6th 2014 09:27 PM

Re: Failure.

I really liked this. Thank you for sharing.

Kintsukuroi.

September 6th 2014 09:39 PM

Re: Failure.

I liked this :)

Raggedy Man, Goodnight!

September 6th 2014 10:00 PM

Re: Failure.

I love this :)

¯|_(ツ)_|¯

September 7th 2014 12:20 AM

Re: Failure.

You're good at this! :D

Wolfz

September 7th 2014 02:41 AM

Re: Failure.

I liked it! :D

.:PrincessZelda:.

September 7th 2014 06:01 PM

Re: Failure.

This was really good! :)

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