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WhisperingSilence

October 16th 2014 09:31 PM

Empty

I'm running on empty,
There's nothing to feel here anymore,
I'm detached and alone,
This life is so exhausting,
I'm sick and I'm tired of fighting,
I need a redemption ,
A miracle maybe,
Maybe the silver metals stars can save me ?
Take one try it out,
Leave a river of crimson red,
Veins now flow empty.

Ennui.

October 17th 2014 01:30 AM

Re: Empty

I love the ending of this one!

Azure.

October 17th 2014 02:34 AM

Re: Empty

I agree with Dez! I love the words you choose and how much emotion you put into your writing.

Kintsukuroi.

October 17th 2014 05:15 AM

Re: Empty

I really like this. :)

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