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THE DARE (Story through Poem)
This is Color Coded of course. Red is what the partner is saying, blue is the narrator. Though it is quite easy to follow, I just thought color coding would be cool:D
The Dare is about a young adult who was abused most of her life due to her sexuality. This has led to severe depression and hurt. Even though she is older, and away from it, it still does affect her daily life. One day, She met someone who told her that a certain drug would help ease her current pains. She declines, and he says "Just try it. I Dare you." And thus, begins her life with "The Dare." Enjoy :D It could kill you! Kill you dead! Those are the words she said And I heard her, But I didn't see her point. So, she yelled She screamed Even got a little mean But I only put a lighter To my joint. Will you ever listen? Or pay attention? I could hear the sadness In her tone. And though I never say it My actions do display it How sometimes I just want to be alone. Why do you do it? She asked me again. Why put yourself In this position? But I don't respond, I just carry on. No answer Can explain this addiction. How did this start? She questions me. What makes you want to go “there”? We sit in silence I think of the violence And then I respond The Dare. The Dare that turns sounds into whispers. The Dare that was reckless and dumb. The Dare that eased the pain. The euphoria that makes me numb. A Dare that said Just try it. A promise that I would feel better. Now a girl That wants to help me. But The dare won't let me let her. Will you end it? End it for me? She pleads from the depths of her soul. I nod my head, And mumble Not yet. Right now The Dare has control. |
Re: THE DARE (Story through Poem)
I really like this. It really shows how someone with an addiction would think if someone would try to persuade to stop.
My favorite lines would be "The euphoria that makes me numb." and "My actions do display it How sometimes I just want to be alone." |
Re: THE DARE (Story through Poem)
Thanks love :) That's what I was going for.
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I really like this! The colour coding is so neat and I like your word choice. ^.^
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Thanks very much love :)
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This is so creative!
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Re: THE DARE (Story through Poem)
I really like this as well. The colour coding was a nice touch, and I loved that the poem told a story - even if it didn't have a happy ending as such. Thanks for sharing, and I hope to see more of your work. :)
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Thank you guys :) And believe me, you will surely see more of my work. :D
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Re: THE DARE (Story through Poem)
This is really good! :)
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