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JollyRancher. February 24th 2015 05:14 AM

Poem #1
 
Fear,
Alone,
Tears,
Hopeless,
Gone,

Light,
Friendship,
Hope,
Love,
Together

I fear being alone,
The tears just run down my cheek,
The hopeless feeling wishing it was gone,

But there is light in friendship,
that gives me hope,
and the love of those friends,
Is what keeps me together.

Thereishope February 24th 2015 07:32 AM

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This is really good! Thanks for sharing! :)

Chai. February 24th 2015 04:10 PM

Re: Poem #1
 
This is good! Thank you for sharing it!

.:PrincessZelda:. February 25th 2015 12:44 AM

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This is really good! :)

Kintsukuroi. February 26th 2015 02:14 AM

Re: Poem #1
 
This is short but it is also written nicely. Thank you for sharing this. :)

¯|_(ツ)_|¯ February 26th 2015 04:26 AM

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Short but really good!

hocus pocus February 28th 2015 11:30 PM

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I like how you wrote this!


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