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WhisperingSilence

May 4th 2015 09:02 PM

look behind

look between the lines,
look behind the smile,
look behind the cuts,
look behind the bruises,
look behind my perfectly practiced masquerade..
look behind the closed doors
look at me
look at what you really see
you'll pass me in the street assume im fine
i'm standing next to you in line
but who am i ?

fallingstargirl

May 4th 2015 09:48 PM

Re: look behind

This is really powerful, even though it's short. I like the repetition!

Ennui.

May 5th 2015 02:44 AM

Re: look behind

I like the repetition here!

Storyteller.

May 5th 2015 01:03 PM

Re: look behind

Ending on a question worked really well here. This is a short piece but it's quite powerful. Thanks for sharing!

Raggedy Man, Goodnight!

May 5th 2015 07:37 PM

Re: look behind

This is really good :)

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