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shattered
her heart it never really mattered,
from the day she was born, her heart made of glass ready to be shattered, from the day she was born she was destined to be beaten and battered, her heart it never really mattered, as she grew older with every beating her heart it shattered her heart got colder, but wait it don't end there the story is not yet over, theres a twist, you see all that self hatred, made her take a blade to her wrist, now her heart and her wrist, her body beaten and battered, tell a story of a girl whos heart , through simply being born, through no choice of her own , shattered. |
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I think this piece really spoke to me in a way that was more through the way it was expressed rather than the way I was reading it. Thank you for posting this. Please do PM/VM me if you need to talk. x
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I really like the repetition in this, it adds to the emotion.
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I like the repetition! I love how you wrote this. <3
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Damn. Repetition works well. Story in little loops and swirls, much as life. Also very moving.
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This is really emotional and I liked the repetition. Thank you for sharing this. :hug:
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