Poem that represents
I thought I would write a poem tonight with two levels: the words themselves and then one where the poem can be applied to life. I'm not too good at that. But oh well.
This poem really does not have a single topic, rather it jumps around, representing thoughts. It changes the way it rhymes quickly, representing the way thoughts can change quickly. It goes from negative to positive, representing the way people try to change their life around. At the part where thoughts of giving up come in, it says about starting over, representing starting over in the worst times in life. I wake up running Running from bad dreams I end the day running Running from my screams I wake up crying Crying away my hope I end my day crying Crying cuz I can't cope. Hiding from thoughts Each day is the same I can't escape if it's already in my brain. I run as fast as wind I outrun the fastest car. I run as long as I can But I can never get far. I am filled with sorrow I cry until I have no tears I am filled with pain From everything in my short years. You might not see it The pain I hide real well. The secrets I keep inside Secrets I dare not tell. Not even my closest friends Know me well enough to see The fight I'm fighting is Draining the life out of me. I'm surrounded by people Yet I'm still so alone Yet giving up is Something I cannot condone I'm going to fight Until I make it through I'm going to start over Start my life anew |
Re: Poem that represents
This is very well written!
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Re: Poem that represents
I really liked this! I hope you're doing okay.
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Re: Poem that represents
I love all of your work! Keep sharing with us. :)
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