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Poem thing I made up:
She woke up this morning feeling horrible again,
Trying to help herself, but instead she helps a friend.
Walking in the cold, with nothing but a blouse,
She leaves the place that she can not call a house.
When she walks in the school, she immediately turns bright,
even though she tried, to kill herself last night.
No one seems to notice, that she’s falling everyday,
and she’s getting close, about to take her life away.
But her simple little smile, and a laugh so soft and fun,
Hide’s he pain and suicidal thoughts, of grabbing that black gun.
She only wishes someone cared, the way she did for her friends,
Before she completely gives it up, and lulls her life to an end.
“Keep your thoughts and feelings hidden, no one will ever care,
if you died, wouldn’t matter at all, they wouldn’t even know you’re not there.”
The thoughts in her mind tell her to leave, but she can’t find a gun to finish the deed,
she wants to make sure that she is dead before she decides to leave.
Don’t you fear, and don’t you cry, don’t shed another tear,
I guess if you wanted her to stay, you should have noticed her pain when she was here

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Such an emotional poem. The ending was chilling. You should write more often, it's a good emotional outlet and I'm glad you're expressing yourself. :)

Stay strong and hang in there. You can pull through this because you're stronger than you know.

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Good stuff indeed. And be strong.

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That poem has me crying haha Seriously your amazing!! You NEED to write more! So talented. Wish I was that talented! Stay strong! ✊🏻❤️

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Woah, this is stunning! So powerful!

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This is written really well and it's so powerful! :hug: I hope to see more of your work. D:

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This is nicely written and it is easy to relate to. I can relate to it, and it drew me in from the first few lines. :hug: