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A poem I wrote
This is a poem I wrote. Umm.... I'm not sure if I'm supposed to post something like this so if not you can take it off here but I figured I should at least try.
_________________________ IF I DIED... ~~~~~~ Look at what they did to me With wordy weapons of flames Now bloody tears fall, you see One day they'll stand in shame I know that people wouldn't cry They would laugh if I died I've always wanted to try Because I've always been denied Sorry I didn't leave sooner I thought I had another chance To finally be healed for the better I thought this feeling was just a trance But my life is getting harder It wouldn't move back in place People see my scars of shame Which causes hate to build even warmer Hopeless days, and sleepless nights Keep appearing in its ways I'm trying to win this fight But now I'm far too weary, so should I die? If I died, I'd wave goodbye With a tear in my eye I'd breathe my last breath And then I'd greet death That's what everyone's counting on And that may be a lie Or that may be true But it's what I should do I'm sorry to those who care Who would bother to shed a tear I'm sorry to my haters For once trying so hard to stay alive But I give up, so this is goodbye |
Re: A poem I wrote
This is so emotional! I know you can get through this.
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Re: A poem I wrote
Thank you both so much.
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Re: A poem I wrote
This poem is amazingly emotional and sad. Each stanza built up to the powerful ending. You should definitely write more.
I hope you are alright. I'm glad you're able to express yourself through poetry. :hug: |
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