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WhisperingSilence

January 29th 2016 06:12 PM

Nights

The days are long
The nights seem to last forever
An army of soliders stampeed through my mind
Reminding of me every mistake
Reminding me my life is the nights to take
The night turns into day
The night has broken
I am broken

DeletedAccount18

January 29th 2016 07:50 PM

Re: Nights

Well done, Lydia! I hope to see more from you soon. :)

Sophrosyne

January 30th 2016 09:55 PM

Re: Nights

I love this! Especially the way it is written. :)

hocus pocus

January 31st 2016 12:15 AM

Re: Nights

I like the third line, and I like how you talk about the night in the fifth line. The last two lines are very powerful when you read them aloud slowly. You did a good job with this! :)

¯|_(ツ)_|¯

January 31st 2016 12:19 AM

Re: Nights

I can definitely relate to this. And I also like how it's written!

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