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WhisperingSilence March 14th 2016 08:28 PM

head full of fears.
 
Little girl with life ahead,
Fears filling her mind with dread,
Holding her back from the dreams shes once had,
Little girl with life ahead,
Dreams and fears combined in one a constantly jumbled up head,
Drowning out the fears
She took a blade, dragged it across her arm and bled.

hocus pocus March 15th 2016 02:55 AM

Re: head full of fears.
 
I like the repetition and the emotion in this. Keep writing!

Kintsukuroi. March 15th 2016 05:50 AM

Re: head full of fears.
 
I hope you're doing okay. :hug:

MsNobleEleanor March 15th 2016 11:08 AM

Re: head full of fears.
 
I really like how powerful this is with the little girl. :hug:

Palmolive March 20th 2016 09:53 AM

Re: head full of fears.
 
I love this but sorry for what you're going through. Keep writing if it helps girl.

Ennui. March 21st 2016 02:22 AM

Re: head full of fears.
 
Short but really stunning!


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