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WhisperingSilence March 28th 2016 06:01 PM

This planet.
 
If I were on mars or jupiter,
Looking onto earth what would I see?
Follow this and read each word wrote by me,
The truth is here for all to see,
Children sleeping on nothing but cardboard,
All faith lost in humantiy,
Wanting a hot meal inside of thier tummy,
If I were on another planet what would I see ?
Bombings and terror attacks,
Suffering and pain,
Read this and follow along every word is wrote by me,
People wanting a friend in a lonley place,
Looking for a friendly face,
When all they've known is hostility,
If I were on mars or jupiter what would I like to see?
Follow and read along and you'll see,
It's quite simply really,
Faith to be restored in humanity,
No more wars and suffering,
Everyone living in harmony.
If you were on mars or jupiter you'd see the same as me,
We're all human stop the hostility.

Ennui. March 29th 2016 03:50 AM

Re: This planet.
 
Aah, so sad but so true. Well written.

hocus pocus March 29th 2016 04:59 AM

Re: This planet.
 
This is really powerful.

DeletedAccount18 March 29th 2016 01:20 PM

Re: This planet.
 
Beautiful, very well written! This is so sad, but true. I think you've expressed what a lot of us feel today, especially with everything that's happened in the past week or two.

Spirit. March 29th 2016 03:46 PM

Re: This planet.
 
It's essential for everyone to hear that message, loud and clear. That, despite our differences, we're all still human and have every capacity of living peacefully together. I loved reading this. Thanks for posting! xx

Celyn March 29th 2016 04:55 PM

Re: This planet.
 
I really liked this! It's sad, but true. And I love the description of what you would like to see too!

Kintsukuroi. March 31st 2016 06:01 AM

Re: This planet.
 
I agree with this and it's written with such power.

Not_here April 12th 2016 02:02 PM

Re: This planet.
 
I agree, it is powerful and well written. Such an important message to share


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