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If I died......(poem)
IF I DIED...
~~~~~~ Look at what they did to me With wordy weapons of flames Now bloody tears fall, you see One day they'll stand in shame I know that people wouldn't cry They would laugh if I died I've always wanted to try Because I've always been denied Sorry I didn't leave sooner I thought I had another chance To finally be healed for the better I thought this feeling was just a trance But my life is getting harder It wouldn't move back in place People see my scars of shame Which causes hate to build even warmer Hopeless days, and sleepless nights Keep appearing in its ways I'm trying to win this fight But now I'm far too weary, so should I die? If I died, I'd wave goodbye With a tear in my eye I'd breathe my last breath And then I'd greet death That's what everyone's counting on And that may be a lie Or that may be true But it's what I should do I'm sorry to those who care Who would bother to shed a tear I'm sorry to my haters For once trying so hard to stay alive But I give up, so this is goodbye |
Re: If I died......(poem)
This is really amazing I'm in tears, it reminds me somehow of my bestfriend because she went through it all, I wish that you are okay now.:hug::hug:
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Re: If I died......(poem)
aww im glad u like it. i was okay for awhile but not anymore again. :(
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Re: If I died......(poem)
I bet a lot of people can relate to these thoughts. Stay strong! :hug:
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Re: If I died......(poem)
I like this and I agree in that a lot of people can probably relate to this. I like how descriptive you are, and I love the alliteration too. ^.^
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Re: If I died......(poem)
Hey Cheyenne! :)
This is really touching! :) And yeah, I'm sure many of us can relate to this. :hug: Stay strong! I'm here for you if you need anything! :hug: See you around! :) Love. - xx |
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