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BreathingIn

April 28th 2016 04:55 PM

Secret love.. A poem

When you love me
When you leave me
You take a piece of me
The piece of you from me
We play games with our hearts
Toss mine back and forth
I like it when you make my hair messy
Because that's what I want
I know it's no good for either of us
But I like you so much...
Tell her you'll be back
You'll be back with me
What she doesn't know
Won't hurt her
Like me when you leave

MsNobleEleanor

April 28th 2016 05:11 PM

Re: Secret love.. A poem

I really like this, has a lot of emotions and describing words. :)

hocus pocus

April 28th 2016 09:51 PM

Re: Secret love.. A poem

This is nicely written. Hope to see more from you soon!

Kintsukuroi.

May 1st 2016 04:47 AM

Re: Secret love.. A poem

Thanks for sharing this! I liked it and I hope to see you posting here again sometime!

Ennui.

May 2nd 2016 12:32 AM

Re: Secret love.. A poem

I really like this!

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