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JollyRancher.

August 27th 2016 06:37 AM

Untitled Poem

Hidden away,
yet in plain sight,
a house full of the broken,
the shattered,
the scarred,

from many different ages,
from many different starts,
all together under one roof
sharing a house,

together they move on,
the house becomes a home,
but with only 3 months,
it'll never truly be home,

safe and sound,
broken and scarred,
together they stand,
in this sheltered house.

hocus pocus

August 28th 2016 01:52 PM

Re: Untitled Poem

I enjoyed reading this. I liked how you used shattered and scarred in the first stanza, and how all the words sounded when I read them.

Elision

August 28th 2016 04:18 PM

Re: Untitled Poem

This was great, the story is so clear even though the poem seems quite ambiguous. I really enjoyed this.

¯|_(ツ)_|¯

August 28th 2016 08:46 PM

Re: Untitled Poem

<3 I'm here any time.

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