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NeuroBeautiful

September 6th 2016 03:44 PM

Not that kind of love

I dont really like it, I just need need to write I guess.

You have a different kind of love
A kind of love
full of rage
shakes me in fear
A special kind of love that makes me want to disappear

I was born on the battlefield
forced into military training
I am screaming
I am pleading
Get me out of here

He already pickled my heart and chewed up my soul
I feel it in my guts, there's this massive empty hole
I will draw all my blood out
Pour it in a ditch in the ground
Bury it before he can see
Before he gets here
Because, he is after my blood
He is after my blood
He is after me

Face Up.

September 6th 2016 03:48 PM

Re: Not that kind of love

This is super thought provoking and very well done.

hocus pocus

September 6th 2016 09:41 PM

Re: Not that kind of love

I like the line about it being a special kind of love that makes you want to disappear, and the part about being born in a boot camp. I like it all though! Hope to see more from you soon.

Insomniac

September 7th 2016 10:04 AM

Re: Not that kind of love

You conveyed the emotion very well. My favorite part is the repetition of the phrase "he is after my blood", I definitely felt the urgency and panic behind it. Great job!

NeuroBeautiful

September 7th 2016 07:15 PM

Re: Not that kind of love

Thank you, all of you :3

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