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Cheesy Love Poem (sorry)
This poem is actually titled "In Love With You, I Will Remain". It also sucks, that'll happen sometimes.
To be in love is to break your legs Until no longer can you stand so tall. But in love with you I will remain Until I feel that small. It pains me always, it hurts my heart That what you feel is not this love for me. And if pain and love are all I know I do not know what else I could be. But did I choose this for myself? Is there rhyme or reason for this madness? I would think not, but love is love And this love is the reason for this sadness. To be in love is to hurt yourself But to never wish this pain on you. So in love with you I will remain Until it's that pain that runs me through. It's an impossible game that I play To want your love but not your pain. But you could never love someone Whose love for you drives them insane. So don't fall in love, my love For you just have far too much to lose. Take it from me, and from my heart That love will not love; it will bruise. To be in love is to have some hope That this love will not end in your fall. So in love with you I will remain Until I am nothing at all. |
Re: Cheesy Love Poem (sorry)
I don't think this is cheesy at all; I think it's deep and meaningful, and kind of sweetly sad. I really like the way you structured it and I hope you decide to share some more of your work with us soon. :)
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Re: Cheesy Love Poem (sorry)
Don't be sorry! This isn't cheesy. It's really nice.
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Re: Cheesy Love Poem (sorry)
This definitely isn't cheesy, I actually find it very emotional, it's beautiful. Thank you for sharing :hug:
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Re: Cheesy Love Poem (sorry)
I agree, I don't think it's cheesy either. It's really beautiful. I would love to see some more of your work soon too.
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Re: Cheesy Love Poem (sorry)
Nice tags you got going there, but this isn't cheesy at all. I would very much love to know who this about. ;) But seriously though, this is quite amazing. You should totally post more often.
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Re: Cheesy Love Poem (sorry)
This wasn't cheesy! I really enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing! Do you think you'll share more in the future?
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