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NeuroBeautiful

October 4th 2016 05:46 PM

1001 ways to die

Some people hug and kiss
Some people like to tickle the not-so-ticklish
Some people pray that their loved ones return
Others find comfort in writing a letter
These are the things that keep hope alive
But I just lay in bed and tell myself
The story of 1,001 ways to die
My favorite story, I love to hear
All the awesome ways I can disappear

Ennui.

October 4th 2016 07:24 PM

Re: 1001 ways to die

I actually found this thought provoking and wonder if there is any way to extend it into a story or something. Only if you want to of course.

NeuroBeautiful

October 4th 2016 07:53 PM

Re: 1001 ways to die

Quote:

Originally Posted by Anhedonia. (Post 1254908)

I actually found this thought provoking and wonder if there is any way to extend it into a story or something. Only if you want to of course.

Thank you Dez,
Hmm I can try! Any ideas?

I have this one friend who tells me I'm a better storyteller than poet xD I am not confident in myself though

Storyteller.

October 4th 2016 11:05 PM

Re: 1001 ways to die

I really like the way this is set up - first introducing what "some people" do and then going into what the narrator is doing, which seems strikingly different. Thanks for sharing, and as always I look forward to seeing your next piece. :hug:

DeletedAccount69

October 5th 2016 02:57 AM

Re: 1001 ways to die

I really enjoyed this. Thank you for sharing.

NeuroBeautiful

October 9th 2016 06:38 AM

Re: 1001 ways to die

Thank you both

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