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AnaBye

November 16th 2016 01:14 AM

The Last Message (poem)

Hello?
You there?
I'm lost again
Hello?
You there?
I'm all alone
Hello?
You there?
Please save me
Hello?
You there?
I'm actually scared
Hello?
You there?
I am sorry
Hello?
You there?
Okay, I'll go
Good-bye!
That's it!
Beep Beep Beeeeeeeeepppppppppp

hocus pocus

November 17th 2016 12:52 PM

Re: The Last Message (poem)

The repetition of "Hello? You there?" is definitely my favorite part of this. Hope to see more from you soon!

DeletedAccount69

November 17th 2016 11:21 PM

Re: The Last Message (poem)

I liked the repetition as well. Thank you for posting.

¯|_(ツ)_|¯

November 20th 2016 12:32 AM

Re: The Last Message (poem)

I also like the repetition.

Storyteller.

November 23rd 2016 05:54 AM

Re: The Last Message (poem)

As the others have said, the repetition was really good, and the emotion behind the piece was evident. I hope you decide to post some more of your work again sometime, I'd love to see it. :)

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