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row your boat
Row row row your boat
Moving quickly as can be The howls and growls bring you back down So try to swallow your screams |
Re: row your boat
As soon as I started to read the first line, it was instinct to read the rest to the tune of row row row your boat! I love it :)
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Re: row your boat
Thank you :)
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Re: row your boat
It sounds perfect when you read it to that tune. I love the creativity here! Hope you are okay. :hug:
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Re: row your boat
I also read it in the tune! I like this spin.
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I read it to the tune as well. I liked this version though.
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One thing I love seeing in poetry or stories is someone taking something familiar and "safe", such as a nursery rhyme or fairytale, and twisting it into something darker or giving it an entirely different meaning. Which is to say, of course, that I really enjoyed this. :p
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I really enjoyed this. At the beginning I smiled as it reminded me of the nursery rhyme. Reading the rest of the lines, it is powerful and beautiful. :)
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I read it as a tune too and it sounds great. I like this a lot and hope you write similar pieces!
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Re: row your boat
like most people i also read this to the tune of row row your boat. i liked it.
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Re: row your boat
Very catchy. Cant wait to read more.
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Re: row your boat
thank you all of you for your feedback!
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