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JollyRancher. September 8th 2017 04:08 AM
Home is where the heart is (Poem)
 
Home is where the heart is,
but what to do when your heart is far.
When home has rejected you,
yet you still love.
And you wish to reunite,
but it's not meant to be.
If home is where the heart is,
guess heartless I'll continue to be.

hocus pocus September 8th 2017 01:32 PM
Re: Home is where the heart is (Poem)
 
This is short but very powerful, especially the ending. It flows well. Thanks for sharing.

On that note I saw a shirt yesterday while I was running errands that says "home is where the heart is."

Storyteller. September 8th 2017 11:23 PM
Re: Home is where the heart is (Poem)
 
I really like the way you wrote this and the feelings you conveyed in it. Thanks for sharing! :)

DeletedAccount69 September 9th 2017 01:21 AM
Re: Home is where the heart is (Poem)
 
I really loved how you wrote this. I could actually relate to it to a certain extent.

Markus September 10th 2017 10:49 AM
Re: Home is where the heart is (Poem)
 
I too, can relate to it. Thanks for sharing.

Adele101 September 10th 2017 07:38 PM
Re: Home is where the heart is (Poem)
 
Thank you so much. It's so beautifully written.

Ennui. September 10th 2017 09:03 PM
Re: Home is where the heart is (Poem)
 
The ending is my favorite part but all of this is really well written.


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