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Svisttt January 26th 2018 05:18 AM

Echoes (poem! <3)
 
(I write lotsa poems, I'll probably be sharing more on here c:)

Shapes of ourselves echo in the stillness.
The hush of the night wrapping us in it's embrace,
Warm and candied like a mother's gentle love,
Soothing the anarchy of lives yet to be lived.

Silhouettes burning against a moon's glow,
Tuning out the universe's cacophony of static,
And it's just us;
Serenity turning our budding minds into stars in the night.

Two figures mourning time beyond this moment,
Singing to everyone's nothing in forgotten dreams.
The streams of time flowing into old quiet summer streets of days passed,
Recurring days played out in our minds, yet to lose their flavor.

DeletedAccount69 January 26th 2018 10:50 AM

Re: Echoes (poem! <3)
 
This was quite good. The writing was beautiful and I'm glad you shared!

hocus pocus January 26th 2018 02:01 PM

Re: Echoes (poem! <3)
 
This is really pretty, thanks for sharing it with us!

matthewmatters January 26th 2018 10:07 PM

Re: Echoes (poem! <3)
 
this really has captured me with a great picture

¯|_(ツ)_|¯ January 26th 2018 11:13 PM

Re: Echoes (poem! <3)
 
This was beautifully written and I am excited for you to post more!

.Brittany. January 31st 2018 01:39 AM

Re: Echoes (poem! <3)
 
This was so well written, I really enjoyed it and can't wait to read more of your work.


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