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Untitled: a poem about self-harm
**This is cross-posted from my blog. I hope that's okay; I really wanted to share it here.**
Take care Use the utmost precision A steel kiss, so soft and sweet Look; it blossoms A trail of red in its wake Carving a path, a promise To less anxiety, less sadness Deliver me, I cry And the blade listens What's one more scar, added to a thousand? A walking, broken mess But for one instant, I touched God |
Re: Untitled: a poem about self-harm
This is a really great poem, and that final line really is really powerful. I love how it's almost calming to read despite what it's about too. Thank you for sharing. :)
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It's serene despite it's graphic description.
It certainly is ok to share any creative work you want on here. :hug: |
Re: Untitled: a poem about self-harm
This was well written and I like how you described it as well such as a 'steel kiss'- very poetic! Thanks for sharing and hope you are doing okay too :hug:
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The style and word choice here is amazing!
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Well done. Honestly I totally jealous of your poem it's truly amazing and well said.
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This is great!
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Re: Untitled: a poem about self-harm
This was lovely to read, sending lots of :hug:
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