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DeletedAccount71

May 6th 2021 10:36 PM

The Yellow Pill

Small, round, yellow salvation;
Ease my mind.
Halt its frantic ascension
Before it reaches its crescendo
And all goes black.
But he bars me.
He blocks my path.
As I press on through the woods,
Brambles and burrs
Give way to barbed wire
And a concrete wall,
Like a slap to the face.
I am suffering,
I implore him.
But he refuses
To tear down his defenses,
No exceptions.
Anger boils, rises, then subsides
Giving way to despair.
Left to stew
In this frenzy of madness.

Face Up.

May 7th 2021 05:30 AM

Re: The Yellow Pill

The language you used in this one is amazing! I think it's one of my favorites you've written.

Everglow.

May 7th 2021 02:46 PM

Re: The Yellow Pill

This is a really well written poem and I agree that the language you've used works really well to express how you feel. Thank you for sharing. :)

.Brittany.

May 9th 2021 12:07 AM

Re: The Yellow Pill

This is incredible. I’ve always enjoyed reading your writing. So many emotions in this!

Celyn

May 9th 2021 12:08 PM

Re: The Yellow Pill

You describe the feelings of being denied something you need so well. Thanks for sharing!

Mindfulness.

May 10th 2021 08:12 AM

Re: The Yellow Pill

I really like this piece! :)

.Jeté Arabesque golfer.

May 23rd 2021 12:05 PM

Re: The Yellow Pill

This was lovely and I liked how you ended this. :hug:

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