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Soda_Voxel

March 3rd 2022 09:48 PM

Codependensea

Inspired by a piece of artwork and its caption I saw on Tumblr. But still a vent piece.
TW: Obsessive love

Codependensea

Look at me! Look at me!
I'll be all you want me to be
I'll style my hair, I'll buy new clothes
Show you the new persona I chose
All for you, my dearest love
Infesting like rats, graceful like dove
I'll change myself to get to you
Perhaps I'll change my gender too?
Become a person I am not
So you think I'm cool and nice and hot
I dedicate my life to thee
The only thing that's real to me
I'll be everything you want me to
Or tear myself to nothing for you
It's only with ME I want you to be
I'm all the fishes in the sea.

Dawn.

March 4th 2022 07:28 AM

Re: Codependensea

I love the way that you have written this.

Ennui.

March 4th 2022 07:39 PM

Re: Codependensea

I agree, I like the style and the tone I read the red words in.

hocus pocus

March 13th 2022 04:22 PM

Re: Codependensea

I absolutely love the title as well! It drew my attention and is a great play on words.

Silvan

March 13th 2022 05:19 PM

Re: Codependensea

I love the rhymes. Honestly I like this piece very much! It's brilliantly written.

Celyn

March 14th 2022 11:45 AM

Re: Codependensea

I, too, really liked the title and play on words, as well as the comparison to being 'all the fishes in the sea'. This was very well written, thanks for sharing! :)

Arabesque- golfing girl.

March 16th 2022 05:48 PM

Re: Codependensea

This was lovely to read and I enjoyed it too. Thank you so much for this. :hug:

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