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Writers Block Condition: Dead. WOO.

With her eyes closed, throat sore, and a mouth full of cold rocks
You can see the glow of the joint in her hand, she can't stop
Life's in lock, feels lost, still stuck in this pot
That she's been swimming in since the last time she looked at the clock

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Feeling trapped and watched
Almost as though shes inside a fish bowl
She tries to find a way out
None prevails
She slowly fails
She sits on the floor
And screams I can't take this anymore.

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Contradiction, is killing her slowly
Trying to forget she needs a new filling for holy
Feeling lonely, her cieling is folding
Reaching for her soul she's leaping for the trophy

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The trophy of death
It defies her
Who she is
What she wants
Where she wants to be
With a bunch of pills
And a strong will
She says her final good-bye
She let out a defeated sigh
And a tear fell from her eye

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what this heartache is all about.
and just when she went to turn out the light
the knight once again returned to fight.
fight for the girl he had loved so
even though her heart he smashed
like ice upon the stone

with rage and fire she spat at him,
"you hurt me and you lied"
and the velvet moon above them wept and wept
the velvet moon had wept

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As the moon wept
taking his sword
she made him watch
as across her wrist it went
this is what you've done to me she said
her knight he stood there jaw dropped
with every pill she popped
he saw life slowly slip away
too scared to pray
he watched the night turn into day
the stars have gone
he sings his song
about a girl who's life was oh so wrong

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He sings the word to his song
'Oh beautiful girl , when did your life go wrong
if I'd have known, I'd have watched you grow , I'd have helped you along the way
Oh beautiful girl, your life went wrong, now here I stand singing this song'
I know I must move on
Give me time and I will
Not yet though, it's too soon .

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the night
sat and crid
one day he pick up
and moved on
to a far off land
where good thing grow
but he was not happy there
he missed his madin so

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So much that he wanted
Nothing more
Than to be in
Her arms again

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Will the poor little girl ever find her way back to that happy place?
Back to the place where everything was okay. The place where
everyone was happy, including her. She is faced with an answer.


(So yeah, I realise I'm a bit late but I figured I'd give it a bash anyway)

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Up ahead she sees a rope of black armour floating in empty space.
It's length filled with the sorrow of mistakes.
Stretching up above into eternity, like waiting for someone to follow it's lead.
Slowly it starts convulsing, a light inside it radiating and pulsing.
Out comes a voice which sings a familiar song.
'Oh beautiful girl, when did your life go wrong'.

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he knows he could have saved her
if only he had looked
realizing this later
his own life he then took

blood poured down his arms
much like the tears from his eyes
hiding in the farms
no one heard his cries

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And one day
Brings her saving angel
The one who would
Help her get through
This dark time in her life

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No more forged smiles,
No more fake laughs
She opens her eyes,
And sees a new path.

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the world has open her eyes
the light now shines
her hope has grown
andn she feels alive

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but this only lasts a moment
when shes rushed too fast in life
she then falls deeper than ever
now much closer to the core

she feels lava beneath her
there is no longer a floor
she grabs onto anything
trying to reach a little more

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her heart reaches for freedom
tears swelling in her eyes
happiness presents itself
in the stormy skies

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as her spirit flows
from its crispy holder
she rises up higher
and never gets colder

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There she sits, Simply waiting,
For all she could see,

It was then that she realized,
Life was one big mystery,

Confusing and cruel,
Unknown and vile,

The world sits still,
Until the girl all but smiles.

(I think this is a wonderful idea!)

~ Angelica

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and as a grin is pained
on her face
she races out
at a fast pace
to her new life
to be reborn
one more time
in another form

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she takes a look around
but theres nothing new is found
just an empty life
so again she grabbs her knife

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on the way
they talked about
everything
that made them shout
they understood
each others pain
and still they walked
through the rain

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So when you think everything is wrong
And you're tired of pretending to be strong
Take another look into the darkness
Try to find the dimming light
As you remember the girl who's life fell apart
All her pain and her bleeding heart
Never forget that this isn't the end
All it takes is for you to just stand up again

*Totally forgot about this D: 'Til now XD

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youre never alone
no matter how you feel
youll be alright
the end is in sight
for all this pain you have
it cant last forever

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and although youre life must come to an end
happyness if just around the bend
so take the path less traveled by
find your way out to the sky
dont be fooled by the senerey
and if you need a hand just talk to me

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shell hold her head up high
and while sometimes shell cry
shes going somewhere this time
because she doesnt feel life is a crime

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With an arrow and some sand
A circle she draws in the ground
'This circle is the world ' She says
Standing in the circle
She sees her life flash before her
Tells herself ' I gotta live this the best I can'
She casts and chants a spell
Feeling free she takes off

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to a place of higer power
she has been found and sheltered
by her Goddess' love
she now feels like a dove
full of peace and happyness
she now sees her lovelyness

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Such a wonderful thing, that beautiful grin
It seemed to let the sunshine in
To the dark and gloomy world below
Where it's continuous dark and snow,
But through the oh so cold winter night
Her smile provides the light
Like a break of day
But if I may say
We don't know how long it'll last

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Even a little light
can keep away the dark
A flicker's all you need
A star, a spark, a heart
And Spongebob isn't relevant;
happiness always is.
Live for love and not for luck
in a flame, a lake, a kiss.